Saturday, December 12, 2009
My Essay(what we did last week)
The essay was,Last week, was a hot and humid day. My father decided to bring us to the beach for a picnic. we decided to bring, sandwiches with tuna spread.We then prepared some apple juice,a picnic mat, an umbrella, a picnic basket to put our foods and drinks, our pail to make SAND CASTLES,swimming suits,goggles,a float, plates for eating,and forks and spoons totake food..Soon, wereached to our destinataion....As soon we reached there, I quickly changed to my swimming suit and jumped into the crstyal sea water........... My father then taught my baby sister how to swim. After she learnt how to swim,we then played happily in the sea.Soon we're hungry and ate some food.Then it was time to go home. After we went back home, we decided to make a special castle for our pet fish. So we went to the shopping centre to buy a special type of sand which won't be wet in the water. We then brought the sand and egerly went back home to decorate our pet's fish tank.After that, we went to take a shower. Then we decided to do painting. What an exciting week I had!!!!
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HI Michelle,
ReplyDeleteI am so touched to see your smilebox slideshow. It is so impressive and keep up your creativity.
On top of this, I praise you for getting improved your writing skill. This is very important and you must put considerable time and effort to sharpen your writing skill. I Love you.